Talk:The Beginning (The X-Files)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Ruby2010 (talk · contribs) 15:50, 28 March 2012 (UTC)

Will review soon.  Ruby  2010/  2013  15:50, 28 March 2012 (UTC)


 * No need for the Vancouver link (see WP:OVERLINK). Same for Los Angeles, California, United States, United Kingdom, and Ireland
 * Why the quotes when mentioned the feature film?
 * it's -> it is; doesn't -> does not (don't use contractions)
 * Who is The Black-Haired Man? Is there a relevent wikilink for him? Add the actor's name?
 * Indeed, the very first shot of the episode—a long look into the sun was—intended by Carter to "boldly announce the show's arrival in Southern California." -?> Indeed, the very first shot of the episode—a long look into the sun—was intended by Carter to "boldly announce the show's arrival in Southern California.
 * new co-Executive Producer -> new co-executive producer
 * Wikilink David Duvhovny in pre-production section
 * Make sure the first mention of Spotnitz includes his name and a wikilink in production section
 * the writers sought... the writers sought (needs switching up)
 * No need to say Carter is the series creator twice; also avoid wikilinking him more than once in the article body
 * Wikilink to Southern California Edison
 * The episode was the second highest rated episode of the sixth season Removed bolded (or input "The Beginning")
 * "The episode received mixed-to-negative reviews from critics, ranging from largely positive to negative". I think this statement could be written differently. Maybe "Critical reception to the episode was divided, as reviews ranged from largely positive to negative"
 * Remove that X-Files link in reception section (I think it's already linked plenty above!)

I'll place the review on hold for seven days. Thanks,  Ruby  2010/  2013  22:40, 29 March 2012 (UTC)
 * OK, I believe I've addresses all the concerns. Thanks a ton for reviewing this article!--Gen. Quon (talk) 02:35, 30 March 2012 (UTC)
 * Made some of the unresolved edits myself. Looks good, passing for GA. Nice work,  Ruby  2010/  2013  20:00, 30 March 2012 (UTC)