Talk:The Boat Race 1934/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: SchroCat (talk · contribs) 08:03, 5 April 2015 (UTC)


 * And so here we are again... I'll make a start a little later on this, but the horror of lunch at the in-laws awaits first. – SchroCat (talk) 08:03, 5 April 2015 (UTC)

Again, all very nicely put together. A couple of minor points to address:

Background
 * "Both crews rowed in boats built by Sims using Ayling oars.[9]" Sims built the boats using oars?
 * Fixed. The Rambling Man (talk) 20:38, 5 April 2015 (UTC)
 * "Evans, writing in The Manchester Guardian predicting that the Light Blues would "win with comparative ease"." I think losing the "predicting" would improve the sentence
 * Done. The Rambling Man (talk) 20:38, 5 April 2015 (UTC)

Crews
 * "jointly the crews were the heaviest in the history of the event": is that ever, or up to that point?
 * At the time. Added.  The Rambling Man (talk) 20:38, 5 April 2015 (UTC)

Race
 * Can you link "canvas-length" again?
 * Yes, done. The Rambling Man (talk) 20:38, 5 April 2015 (UTC)

Cheers – SchroCat (talk) 20:32, 5 April 2015 (UTC)
 * Done, thanks, and happy Easter. The Rambling Man (talk) 20:38, 5 April 2015 (UTC)


 * All good for a pass from me. Well done on another one - and happy Easter too! - SchroCat (talk) 20:46, 5 April 2015 (UTC)