Talk:The Boat Race 1937/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Tim riley (talk · contribs) 12:04, 6 April 2015 (UTC)

Comments
Taking as read my usual bleat about false titles (Rickett, twice), there are two minor drafting points:
 * Background
 * "The Light Blues had thirteen consecutive races coming into this year's event" – it looks as though "won" is missing before "thirteen".
 * Race
 * " umpire Rickett started the race … A false start ensued, with umpire Rickett failing to hear…" – one "umpire" too many?  Tim riley  talk    12:04, 6 April 2015 (UTC)

Nothing to delay us there, though please tweak. Therefore:

Review summary

 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
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 * B. MoS compliance:
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. References to sources:
 * B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
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 * Thanks Tim, I've addressed the comments you left. I very much appreciate your interest and ongoing support.  The Rambling Man (talk) 12:33, 6 April 2015 (UTC)