Talk:The Boat Race 1967/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Ritchie333 (talk · contribs) 11:51, 11 December 2014 (UTC)

Everyone else is doing Boat Race GAs, so I thought I'd give one a go.

Lead

 * Might it be worth wikilinking Goldie (Cambridge University Boat Club) as "Goldie" in the lead as well as the body, so people don't miss it?
 * Linked. The Rambling Man (talk) 13:36, 11 December 2014 (UTC)

Background

 * I assume some coaching team members are given as just initials because the source doesn't specify their full names.
 * That's right, I've usually done this as a last resort because no Google searches or literary sources I have specify more than that. It's all a bit public school of course... The Rambling Man (talk) 13:36, 11 December 2014 (UTC)
 * The sentence listing the coaching teams is a bit long. It might be better to split it so that Oxford and Cambridge get a sentence each.
 * Split as suggested. The Rambling Man (talk) 13:36, 11 December 2014 (UTC)

Race

 * Do we really need a comma between "year" and "and" in the opening sentence? It flows quite well for me.
 * No, I've removed it. The Rambling Man (talk) 13:36, 11 December 2014 (UTC)

Summary

 * I can't think of anything else, this is good. I'll put the review on hold so the issues above can be addressed. Ritchie333 (talk) (cont)  11:51, 11 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Many thanks, I hope I've addressed all your concerns. The Rambling Man (talk) 13:36, 11 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Looks good to me. I've got no idea what on earth is going on here and here but I'll pass the review now. Ritchie333 (talk) (cont)  13:53, 11 December 2014 (UTC)