Talk:The Boat Race 1998/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Seattle (talk · contribs) 23:59, 5 August 2014 (UTC)

I'll review this soon. Seattle (talk) 23:59, 5 August 2014 (UTC)
 * Comments:


 * Cambridge, coached by Robin Williams.[9] suffered a setback comma instead
 * Duh, fixed. The Rambling Man (talk) 18:08, 7 August 2014 (UTC)
 * commons:File:Alistair Potts 1990.jpg needs a personality rights warning
 * Added at Commons. The Rambling Man (talk) 18:08, 7 August 2014 (UTC)
 * If it's a record time, can you mention it in the lead?
 * I thought I had : "... won by three lengths in a record time..." The Rambling Man (talk) 18:08, 7 August 2014 (UTC)
 * The time itself, 16 minutes and 19 seconds. Seattle (talk) 18:23, 7 August 2014 (UTC)
 * Mentioned actual time. The Rambling Man (talk) 19:41, 7 August 2014 (UTC)
 * Can you find/mention the largest disparity in history?
 * Not easily. The source I use claims the "second-largest disparity". The Rambling Man (talk) 18:08, 7 August 2014 (UTC)
 * Can you mention the previous year of the record?
 * Done. The Rambling Man (talk) 18:08, 7 August 2014 (UTC)
 * I think tying the record in the reserve race is worth a mention in the lead.
 * Done. The Rambling Man (talk) 18:08, 7 August 2014 (UTC)
 * Does any reference mention weather conditions?
 * Done, to an extent. The Rambling Man (talk) 18:08, 7 August 2014 (UTC)

OK. Seattle (talk) 17:31, 7 August 2014 (UTC)
 * Thanks again for your generosity. The Rambling Man (talk) 18:08, 7 August 2014 (UTC)