Talk:The Brothers (Kinzer book)

How to improve the "The Brothers (Kinzer book)" page.
The page gives the impression of having been written in great haste, with insufficient proof-reading. It is full of elementary grammatical and other errors. For example: "Dulles play a vital role" (probably should begin "the Dulles brothers played"); "Foster was a devoted wife" ("wife" should be "husband"); "They brother had" (should be "The brothers had"). This list is not exhaustive.

I also note, FWIMBW, that all the references are to secondary sources (book reviews).

The page is interesting enough to deserve careful proof-reading and correction. Tenscraze (talk) 10:54, 10 April 2023 (UTC)