Talk:The Calusari/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 16:44, 30 July 2012 (UTC)


 * Infobox
 * To match with other articles, link "2" in the infobox for season, then remove the episode lists at the very bottom of the infobox
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   19:13, 30 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Lede
 * "(stylized as "The Căluşari") is not mentioned/or expanded upon in the article ("Production"). Nor referenced
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   19:13, 30 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Make a note that it was US airing by saying it is an "American science fiction" or, after Fox network say United States "Fox network in the United States."
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   19:13, 30 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Only link Fox, not network
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   19:13, 30 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Episode can't really "premiered" how about "originally aired"
 * Done (although, premiered is a verb...).-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   19:13, 30 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Link science fiction to science fiction on television. I think.
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   19:13, 30 July 2012 (UTC)
 * "It premiered on the Fox network on April 14, 1995. It was written by Sara B. Charno and directed by Michael Vejar. The episode is a "Monster-of-the-Week" story, unconnected to the series' wider mythology, or fictional history." wack of run-on perhaps re-word to:, which originally aired on the Fox network on April 14, 1995. Written by Sara B. Charno, the episode is a "Monster-of-the-Week" story, unconnected to the series' wider mythology, or fictional history. Directed by Michael Vejar, [etc.].
 * I fail to see how my original sentence is a run-on (a run-on means one long, poorly written sentence). Since mine is several, and you're suggesting a cosmetic re-write, I don't feel that it is necessary.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   19:13, 30 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Link Nielsen household rating
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   19:13, 30 July 2012 (UTC)
 * "The Calusari" received mixed reviews from television critics, with inconsistencies in the plot being cited as the main detractors." Re-write to: "The Calusari" received mixed reviews, with critics citing inconsistencies in the plot as the main detractors."
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   19:13, 30 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Plot
 * Mulder’s is curly aposthrate. It should be regular ('), as per MOS:PUNCT.
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   19:13, 30 July 2012 (UTC)
 * "As police" → "As the police"
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   19:13, 30 July 2012 (UTC)
 * grandmother’s is curly aposthrate. It should be regular ('), as per MOS:PUNCT.
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   19:13, 30 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Production
 * Add comma after Charno
 * Commas should be used, in this case, two separate two sentences. Since these aren't two complete sentences, this shouldn't be there.
 * Broadcast and reception
 * Episode can "premiered" how about "originally aired"
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   19:13, 30 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Only Fox should be linked
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   19:13, 30 July 2012 (UTC)
 * "The Calusari" received mixed reviews from television critics, with inconsistencies in the plot being cited as the main detractors." Re-write to: "The Calusari" received mixed reviews, with critics citing inconsistencies in the plot as the main detractors."
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   19:13, 30 July 2012 (UTC)
 * References
 * Ref. 2: Link to "Fox Broadcasting Company", not "corporation"
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   19:13, 30 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Ref. 6: "The X Files - The Calusari rated 18 by the BBFC" after The X-Files should be an en-dash, rather than a regular –, it should be – per WP:DASH
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   19:13, 30 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Ref. 7 is not needed. It is just a search for Ref. 6
 * It's actually to show that its the highest-rated of the series. Ref 6 does not show this data.
 * Ref. 8: Doubled periods with Time, Inc., which should be Time, Inc
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   19:13, 30 July 2012 (UTC)
 * External links
 * "The X-Files Wiki, an external wiki". Repetitive. How about: "The X-Files, an external wiki"
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   19:13, 30 July 2012 (UTC)

Great work! TBrandley 17:07, 30 July 2012 (UTC)
 * All have been addressed or my reasoning put down. Thank you!-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   19:13, 30 July 2012 (UTC)
 * No problem. I'll pass. Congrats! TBrandley 19:21, 30 July 2012 (UTC)