Talk:The Carpet/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 23:03, 4 October 2012 (UTC)

Comments


 * In the infobox, "The Office" should be in italics
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   00:52, 22 October 2012 (UTC)
 * Where are production codes and running times referenced?
 * Added.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   00:52, 22 October 2012 (UTC)
 * Unlink television series per WP:OVERLINK
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   00:52, 22 October 2012 (UTC)
 * "twentieth" should be "20th", as per WP:MOSNUM
 * I can't find this anywhere in MOSNUM. As long as I'm consistent, it shouldn't be a big deal.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   00:52, 22 October 2012 (UTC)
 * "In this episode, In this episode," hum...
 * Fixed.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   00:52, 22 October 2012 (UTC)
 * "a disgusting" I don't think that represents a neutral point of view, as a requirement of the GA criteria. Could that be changed, as in your opinion, it is "disgusting"
 * I don't think this is non-NPOV. Someone crapped in his office, which is universally considered disgusting.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   00:52, 22 October 2012 (UTC)
 * "first and only" shouldn't episode be added after that
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   00:52, 22 October 2012 (UTC)
 * "In its" in should be upon
 * Fixed.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   00:52, 22 October 2012 (UTC)
 * "For a time," well, when then?
 * Reworded.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   00:52, 22 October 2012 (UTC)
 * Are there any images of people related, perhaps?
 * Added a picture of Paul Lieberstein.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   00:52, 22 October 2012 (UTC)
 * Unlink American per WP:OVERLINK in cultural references
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   00:52, 22 October 2012 (UTC)
 * "an American reality television" actually, unlink reality television there, as its first link is above, also in cultural references, thus a WP:OVERLINK violation
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   00:52, 22 October 2012 (UTC)
 * "NBC" should be written out fully as "the National Broadcasting Company (NBC)" on first mention, per MOS:ACRO
 * It's mentioned in the intro, and that should be enough (and that's been fine and good for all other Office GAs).-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   00:52, 22 October 2012 (UTC)
 * Link Television Without Pity per WP:UNDERLINK
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   00:52, 22 October 2012 (UTC)
 * "The episode was viewed by 8.6 million viewers.[9] The episode", that changed be changed to something else, the second part, two of "the episode"'s sentence before sentence doesn't seem right
 * Reworded.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   00:52, 22 October 2012 (UTC)
 * "Furthermore, the episode was particularly popular with fans of the series, particularly college students" reference?
 * It's Ref. 13. I bundled the references.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   00:52, 22 October 2012 (UTC)
 * Double quotes (") should be single quotes (') in reference titles in this article, as per WP:MOS
 * I believe it's all better now.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   00:52, 22 October 2012 (UTC)
 * Link NBC in all reference titles
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   00:52, 22 October 2012 (UTC)
 * Link NBC.com in external links
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   00:52, 22 October 2012 (UTC)
 * Categories should be sorted in alphabetical order
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   00:52, 22 October 2012 (UTC)

Overall; good work. On hold for now. TBrandley 23:32, 21 October 2012 (UTC)
 * I have fixed or responded to all the issues. Thank you!-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   00:52, 22 October 2012 (UTC)
 * Passing. TBrandley 01:00, 22 October 2012 (UTC)