Talk:The Castafiore Emerald/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Dr. Blofeld (talk · contribs) 12:12, 31 August 2015 (UTC)

Give me a few days on this.♦ Dr. Blofeld  12:12, 31 August 2015 (UTC)


 * Lede
 * "The book was considered " -by whom?
 * Reference provided in the "Critical Analysis" section. — Ssven2  Speak 2 me '' 08:24, 2 September 2015 (UTC)


 * Marlinspike Hall -where is this, Belgium, England, Italy?
 * Technically in Belgium according to the book. I'll add a bit of information on it in the background section. — Ssven2  Speak 2 me '' 08:24, 2 September 2015 (UTC)
 * ✅. — Ssven2  Speak 2 me '' 08:42, 2 September 2015 (UTC)


 * Plot
 * "Tintin and Captain Haddock are walking through the countryside" -again, is this Belgian or English countryside?
 * As per the English version, it's the fictional English countryside of Marlinshire (i.e. like Hampshire, Worcestershire, Yorkshire etc.) — Ssven2  Speak 2 me '' 08:27, 2 September 2015 (UTC)


 * History
 * Tintin in Tibet, The Black Island, Tintin and the Picaros, The Adventures of Jo, Zette and Jocko. -Add years in brackets?
 * ✅ Added. — Ssven2  Speak 2 me '' 08:27, 2 September 2015 (UTC)


 * Per MOS avoid linking countries like Germany and United States
 * ✅ Removed links. — Ssven2  Speak 2 me '' 08:27, 2 September 2015 (UTC)


 * Critical
 * Who are Jean-Marc Lofficier, Randy Lofficier and Harry Thompson?
 * Wrote about it in the Critical analysis section. — Ssven2  Speak 2 me '' 08:31, 2 September 2015 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality:
 * B. MoS compliance:
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. References to sources:
 * B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:

Excellent job, little to complain about for GA, will appreciate the effort.♦  Dr. Blofeld  08:37, 2 September 2015 (UTC)
 * Thanks, Doc. My first Tintin GA! Yay! The credit also goes to Midnightblueowl (without whose initiative with Tintin articles I might have found the going difficult with this one.) and Prhartcom (For his deeply useful inputs and edits.) —  Ssven2  Speak 2 me '' 08:43, 2 September 2015 (UTC)