Talk:The Cherrytree Sessions/GA1

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Reviewer: HĐ (talk · contribs) 09:54, 14 November 2013 (UTC)

I'll review this :) &mdash; Simon (talk) 09:54, 14 November 2013 (UTC)

So much sorry for the delay, comments to follow


 * The Cherrytree Sessions is considered one volume of a series of releases first envisaged by Cherrytree Records label head and producer Martin Kierszenbaum in order to promote his artists ---> I can't understand clearly what this sentence means, please clarify it
 * Gaga's performance for The Cherrytree Sessions was first released as a video posted to the label's website ---> I think "performances" would be better because Gaga performed a number of songs during the event, didn't she?
 * After discussing her international travels, Gaga performs an acoustic version of "Brown Eyes" at the piano where she performed for Kierszenbaum the first time they met ---> past tense applies here
 * The performance coincided... ---> Again please change "performance" into plural form
 * The EP itself consists of three tracks recorded live from the performance ---> "the show" or "the event" would be much better
 * the performance of "Just Dance"'s ---> reduce that "'s"
 * The Cherrytree Sessions debuted at 45 on the Mexican Albums Chart, on August 20, 2010 --> Reduce the comma
 * Hi Simon, I have corrected these. — Indian: BIO  · [ ChitChat  ] 16:13, 14 December 2013 (UTC)
 * Passing. Good work! &mdash; Simon (talk) 10:16, 15 December 2013 (UTC)