Talk:The Chronicles of Riddick: Escape from Butcher Bay/GA2

GA Review
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Hi there, I'm MacMed and I am going to be handling this review. Let's get started :) Regards, MacMedtalk stalk 23:13, 13 August 2009 (UTC)

Links
The links are mostly good, there's just a few issues that I listed below. Regards, MacMedtalk stalk 23:35, 13 August 2009 (UTC)


 * The glitches link in the reception section is a redirect.


 * The Vivendi Universal link in the first paragraph of Development is a redirect.


 * The first Chronicles of Riddick' link in the same section is a redirect to the film article, though I think you meant to link it to an article about the video game franchise. Feel free to correct me if I am wrong about the target you want.


 * The levels link in the Gameplay section is a redirect.


 * The enhanced remake link in the lead is a redirect.

Article

 * Could you put something about the development in the lead? It summarizes every section but that.


 * GA review (see here for criteria)

Everything is good, just waiting on the lead fix.
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS):
 * What do I have to fix? GamerPro64 (talk) 20:16, 14 August 2009 (UTC)
 * I think I fixed the lead. GamerPro64 (talk) 23:26, 14 August 2009 (UTC)


 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * I will do these tomorrow.
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Congrats.
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Congrats.
 * Congrats.