Talk:The City of Her Dreams/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 11:29, 16 June 2015 (UTC)

I got to get through this. Continuing the 1910 sweep. JAG UAR   11:29, 16 June 2015 (UTC)

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Checking against the GA criteria

 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * I would recommend splitting the lead into two paragraphs to make the lead more balanced, per WP:LEAD
 * Nothing on the Production in the lead, despite the section being scarce the lead must summarise, even if it's minor
 * The plot summary in the lead is quite extensive
 * Is the list of people in the production sentence a definite list of people who worked on the film? The lead says otherwise
 * The names in the Cast section are not in the lead
 * "Ella's life at her aunt's home is miserable and she dreams of going to New York City" - no need for "she"
 * "has all money to buy anything which she fancies" - informal, maybe "desires"
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * The assertions regarding the cameramen could be original research, but both candidates are included in the reference given.
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

Well researched and well written, once again. Nothing major so it can be put on hold. I am passing this on the grounds of good research. JAG UAR   16:36, 16 June 2015 (UTC)