Talk:The Council of Elrond/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: AryKun (talk · contribs) 03:24, 11 January 2022 (UTC)

Hey there, I recently finished reading LOTR, so feeling minimally qualified to review this. AryKun (talk) 03:24, 11 January 2022 (UTC)


 * Should it be "Book 2" instead of "book 2"?
 * Done.
 * The Fellowship of the Ring link leads to the page for Vol. 1 of the series, and there isn't actually a page for the actual Fellowship of the Ring, so maybe a gloss instead?
 * Ah, updated the link target for Fellowship of the Ring (characters), which had been reorganised.
 * Link Hobbit.
 * Done.
 * Link Episcopal.
 * Done.
 * Link Aragorn.
 * Done.
 * The last paragraph in the lead sounds like Wikipedia is stating this opinion. Could it be rephrased to attribute whoever says this?
 * Done.
 * Link philologist.
 * Done.
 * "in 1954–55"→ "from 1954–1955"
 * Done.
 * Perhaps mentions that Frodo is Bilbo's nephew in "In-universe"?
 * Best not, they're actually both first and second cousins.
 * Wizards is inconsistently capitalized.
 * Fixed.
 * Link Dark Lord, as there are multiple Dark Lords in LOTR.
 * Done.
 * Link Elrond at first mention.
 * Done.
 * Link Dwarf at first mention.
 * Done.
 * "declaiming" could be replaced by a simpler word.
 * Done.
 * The entire prophecy extract contains too many duplinks; instead, you could use in square bracket notes explaining what each of the linked word refers to (e.g. Imladris [Rivendell])
 * Hey, perhaps you missed this one. As soon as this comment is dealt with, the article will be ready to pass. AryKun (talk) 03:32, 12 January 2022 (UTC)
 * Ah yes. Actually I think the use of links here is by far the least intrusive way to mark up the verse. Adding words in square brackets would make the verse longer and it wouldn't scan, forcing readers to trust to skip the bracketed words.
 * Link Eagle.
 * Done.
 * Link Sam, and maybe add his last name, since he hasn't been mentioned before.
 * Done.
 * "on Tor.com" → "for Tor.com"?
 * Done.
 * "Tolkien writes in an" → "Tolkien wrote in an"
 * Done.
 * Tyranny is misspelled.
 * Fixed.
 * Images need alt text.
 * Added.
 * Everything else is fine. AryKun (talk) 04:50, 11 January 2022 (UTC)
 * : Many thanks. Chiswick Chap (talk) 09:30, 11 January 2022 (UTC)
 * Alright, everything else is good, so have passed this. AryKun (talk) 11:17, 12 January 2022 (UTC)