Talk:The Coup (The Office)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Gen. Quon (talk · contribs) 21:05, 13 July 2012 (UTC)


 * Intro: I would add air date
 * Intro: Add acts after characters
 * Intro: Call of Duty should be italicized
 * Intro: Maybe link Stamford
 * Plot: "he makes a reference to Entourage" Is this supported by a cite?
 * Not sure (it was there before I got to the article). I've removed it.  Ruby  2010/  2013  00:13, 17 July 2012 (UTC)

That's all the issues I can find. Images are good, and formatting is good. On hold.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)  22:11, 16 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Production: Maybe explain in a nutshell what Lady MacBeth did and how Angela was acting like that. It'd be cool if you put a free image of Lady MacBeth in the section too.
 * Production: Link some of the character names, like Creed and Meredith, etc.
 * References: Use consistent dating methods.
 * I've made all the fixes. Good idea about Lady Macbeth -- let me know how the edits turned out!  Ruby  2010/  2013  00:13, 17 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Excellent. It all looks great. I moved the Lady MacBeth pic just so there isn't a huge white space, but other than that, looks good. I pass.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)  19:01, 17 July 2012 (UTC)