Talk:The Crystal Empire/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 12:00, 23 July 2021 (UTC)


 * Add a short description and move the "use mdy dates" template below the hatnote (WP:ORDER).


 * "animated television series My Little Pony: Friendship Is Magic" "animated television series My Little Pony: Friendship Is Magic" – (WP:SEAOFBLUE)


 * Plot section: Part one is 397 words and part two is 372 so this passes MOS:TVPLOT.
 * "with a dark magic which disables" "with dark magic that disables"


 * Remove the comma after "Twilight jumps for the Heart".


 * Remove the comma after "King Sombra's attacks".


 * "putting needs of others" "putting the needs of others"


 * The caption for the image in #Production is kinda long and mostly unsourced.
 * Shortened and added source


 * "to imply him as a once-powerful ruler" "to imply he was a once-powerful ruler"


 * Archive sources (you can use this automatic tool).


 * Ping when done. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 14:10, 23 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Thank you for your comments, . I have hopefully addressed your comments and if there are any other changes you'd like me to make, please feel free to let me know! Pamzeis (talk) 01:40, 24 July 2021 (UTC)