Talk:The Day After Tomorrow (TV special)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: GRAPPLE   X  23:52, 26 August 2011 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality:
 * B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. References to sources:
 * B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Pass or Fail:

Many thanks for this timely review. I believe that the 1a concerns that you raised have been fully addressed - in addition, I've given the whole article a thorough copyedit. I also take your point about overuse of citations and have eliminated all references to "Bentley, 315" in instances where it was present along with two other citations (therefore, each sentence is now followed by no more than two citations). Page numbers are now preceded by the "p." abbreviation. Thanks again. Regards,  Super Mario  Man  17:18, 27 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Reviewed the changes, and also managed to address the table thing as well (feel free to revert it if you preferred the style of your last version instead). Going to pass this one now. Well done! GRAPPLE   X  18:57, 27 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Oh, I see, that's what you meant by padding - around the edges of the table. Sorry, I mistakenly thought that it was something to do with adding borders and cell-padding. I agree that the new version is much better. Now, I really must give H:TABLE another look... Anyway, thanks for passing the article!  Super Mario  Man  19:50, 27 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Yeah, I probably should have been clearer. H:TABLE didn't have much going on about margins that helped, though. I had to trawl through my past experiments on a different wiki to remember the coding... GRAPPLE   X  19:54, 27 August 2011 (UTC)