Talk:The Deal (Seinfeld)/GA1

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Hey Music. Pretty interesting article, with only a few concerns... —  Hun ter   Ka  hn  18:56, 24 January 2010 (UTC) That's about it! —  Hun ter   Ka  hn  18:56, 24 January 2010 (UTC)
 * From the Plot section: "When Jerry's neighbour Kramer (Michael Richards) gives Elaine a bench, which she is much more grateful for, she and Jerry talk over their agreement." Could you expand this a little. I think somebody reading this who had not seen the episode would be confused. Why would he get her a bench, and why would that make them discussion their arrangement?
 * Under the Production section, the photo caption reads: "Larry David wrote the episode, based on a personal experience." Could you add a bit of context to the caption as to who exactly Larry Davis is, in relation to this show?
 * Could you add the fact that it received an Emmy nomination to the lead section of the article?


 * Hey man. Fixed your issues.-- Music 26/  11  17:20, 29 January 2010 (UTC)

A good article is:
 * 1) Well-written: Prose is good, MOS is good.
 * 2) Factually accurate and verifiable: Sources are good, no original research.
 * 3) Broad in its coverage: Covers main aspects, no unneeded detail.
 * 4) Neutral: Yes.
 * 5) Stable: Yes.
 * 6) Illustrated, if possible, by images: Yes.

Nice work, that's a pass. —  Hun ter   Ka  hn  05:55, 30 January 2010 (UTC)