Talk:The Demands of Liberal Education/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Herald (talk · contribs) 15:35, 28 March 2015 (UTC)

You'll have the full review within a day. Thanks. -The Herald the joy of the LORD my strength 15:35, 28 March 2015 (UTC)

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Comments and discussion

 * ...book by Meira Levinson that... could be changed to ...book by an American author Meira Levinson that... or the like. -The Herald <sup style="margin-left:0.5px">the joy of the LORD <sub style="margin-left:-47.5px">my strength 15:43, 28 March 2015 (UTC)


 * Some minor Dab Fixes required. -The Herald <sup style="margin-left:0.5px">the joy of the LORD <sub style="margin-left:-47.5px">my strength 15:43, 28 March 2015 (UTC)


 * The term citizenry could be better explained. -The Herald <sup style="margin-left:0.5px">the joy of the LORD <sub style="margin-left:-47.5px">my strength 15:43, 28 March 2015 (UTC)


 * The third para of summary section needs a bit more trims ti remove the repeated ..argues that... -The Herald <sup style="margin-left:0.5px">the joy of the LORD <sub style="margin-left:-47.5px">my strength 15:43, 28 March 2015 (UTC)


 * It would be good to leave a redlink of Meira Levinson anywhere in the article. -The Herald <sup style="margin-left:0.5px">the joy of the LORD <sub style="margin-left:-47.5px">my strength 15:47, 28 March 2015 (UTC)


 * Any info on the discussion of the book in American Philosophical Association's 2002 annual meeting will do, but good. I mean, you can say what they said and reviewed and commented and the like. -The Herald <sup style="margin-left:0.5px">the joy of the LORD <sub style="margin-left:-47.5px">my strength 15:53, 28 March 2015 (UTC)


 * Thanks for the review so far. I believe the above have been addressed. I think declaring Levinson an author would be redundant, since she wrote the book, and I'm not sure it's relevant that she's American unless it's suggested for some reason in some style guide section. "Citizenry" is used in a straightforward manner as "subjects of the state", but if it still appears as jargon, I can put that phrase in a parenthetical. I don't believe Meira Levinson passes the general notability guideline or WP:SCHOLAR quite yet, so I didn't redlink her. I don't have details from the APA 2002 meeting past the published proceedings, though I elaborated a bit more from that document. czar ⨹   09:33, 29 March 2015 (UTC)

Result
The article passed the GA review to fetch a GA status. All looks good and meets all the criterion for a GA. -The Herald <sup style="margin-left:0.5px">the joy of the LORD <sub style="margin-left:-47.5px">my strength 12:09, 29 March 2015 (UTC)