Talk:The Divine Comedy (Milla Jovovich album)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Novice7 | Talk 04:43, 14 December 2010 (UTC)

Lead

 * The lead should summarize the whole article. The first paragraph is not clear enough and is too short.
 * Despite the positive reception, Jovovich has yet to release an official follow-up album – what is its significance here?
 * Third paragraph is confusing.
 * Similar case in fourth para too. Why do you include details of free downloads etc?

Background and production

 * The photo is a copyright violation.
 * A comma is needed after SBK Records
 * pop star → pop singer. Also, the information about Australian Idol should be removed.
 * Many sentences lack sources.
 * Why are music videos mentioned here?
 * Also, why second album details?

Music and lyrics

 * ..."Taken from Milla's site" – poor. Remove that. And what is its signifance? Who said it?
 * Her last name is Jovovich. So, use that and not Milla.
 * Why a review in this section?
 * Also needs sources

Release and promotion

 * This section should go below the Album title and artwork section.
 * Again, a clear copyright violation.
 * Needs copy-editing and also sources.

Album title and artwork

 * There are lots of unwanted information. Remove them.
 * Source them too.

Reception

 * Jovovich had to fight for her rights to have her own music released – source?
 * Why some underscores?
 * Again, sources needed. Add [sic] wherever needed.

Accolades

 * Just the addition to Slant Magazine. Can be moved to reception section.
 * Needs copy-editing.

Track listing

 * Source
 * Is the "Unreleased" section necessary?
 * Also, formats?
 * Credits should be a different section. Its too short. Also, source the credits.

Charts

 * In her main page, there is a UK chart? Why is it not included? Also, it is US Heatseekers chart.

Release history

 * Source needed

References and media

 * Many references need template.
 * Two copyright violations.


 * I'm sorry. But, this article is definitely not GA material. I'm failing it for now. Novice7  |  Talk  04:11, 27 December 2010 (UTC)