Talk:The Duel (The Office)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Xtzou ( Talk ) 22:05, 8 May 2010 (UTC)

Hi, I only have a few comments, as the article is generally fine. You probably noticed that I did some minor copy editing which you are free to override.

Xtzou ( Talk ) 22:05, 8 May 2010 (UTC)
 * How did they duel? A fist fight, or what? (At first I assumed it was with swords.)
 * Only a physical fight. I added some language to make that more clear. —  Hun ter   Ka  hn  23:48, 8 May 2010 (UTC)
 * "During the scene when Andy returns to the office and confronts his co-workers amid long standing silence," - how is silence long standing in this situation?
 * I'm not sure I understand your comment. It's a scene where he goes in and there's a long awkward silence for a long time. I changed the language a bit here too... —  Hun ter   Ka  hn  23:48, 8 May 2010 (UTC)
 * "The Dwight bobblehead doll is a reference to the second season episode "Valentine's Day", in which Angela gave it to Dwight as a gift." - How is a reference to a previous episode a "cultural reference"?
 * I guess it's more self-referential, but other television episodes have included these kind of references. If you don't think it works, feel free to delete it. —  Hun ter   Ka  hn  23:48, 8 May 2010 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review! —  Hun ter   Ka  hn  23:48, 8 May 2010 (UTC)


 * Reply. What about "a long, awkward silence"? The rest, "for a long time" is redundant. That would make sense to me: "a long, awkward silence". Xtzou ( Talk ) 00:21, 9 May 2010 (UTC)
 * Looks fine. —  Hun ter   Ka  hn  00:59, 9 May 2010 (UTC)

 GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality: Good
 * B. MoS compliance: Complies with  MoS
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. References to sources: Reliable sources
 * B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary: Yes
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail: Pass!
 * Congratulations! Xtzou ( Talk ) 16:34, 9 May 2010 (UTC)
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail: Pass!
 * Congratulations! Xtzou ( Talk ) 16:34, 9 May 2010 (UTC)
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail: Pass!
 * Congratulations! Xtzou ( Talk ) 16:34, 9 May 2010 (UTC)
 * Congratulations! Xtzou ( Talk ) 16:34, 9 May 2010 (UTC)