Talk:The Earth Is Not a Cold Dead Place/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 18:52, 30 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments
 * "Forming in Austin, Texas in" I don't like this, you mean the band formed in 1999? And comma after Texas.  Or you could say "After forming..."?
 * Addressed. Roniius  talk to me 15:40, 5 October 2021 (UTC)


 * Lead is brief. Anything about the style of the album or the critical/sales reception?
 * Addressed. Roniius  talk to me 15:40, 5 October 2021 (UTC)


 * Producer is noted in the infobox but he is not referred to as producer in the article itself?
 * Added to article body. Roniius  talk to me 15:40, 5 October 2021 (UTC)


 * "formed in 1999 in Austin, Texas, forming" formed ... forming.
 * Removed. Roniius  talk to me 15:40, 5 October 2021 (UTC)


 * "All the tracks on The Earth Is Not a Cold Dead Place do not have" -> "None of the tracks .... have ..."
 * Changed. Roniius  talk to me 15:40, 5 October 2021 (UTC)


 * "2000 - the " en-dash, not hyphen.
 * Changed. Roniius  talk to me 15:40, 5 October 2021 (UTC)


 * "scholars of post-September 11 music Fisher and Flota" I'm not sure I understand, are these people? Do they have first names?  Does "September 11 music" mean stuff related to 9/11 or just any music anywhere recorded after 9/11?
 * Added first names. Changed to "September 11-related music". Roniius  talk to me 15:40, 5 October 2021 (UTC)


 * "times... and" non-breaking space before the ellipsis.
 * Added. Roniius  talk to me 15:40, 5 October 2021 (UTC)


 * Check online source titles, no spaced hyphens -> spaced en-dashes please. And same comment on ellipsis applies there too.
 * Added en dashes. Ellipsis not added because not in original title. Roniius  talk to me 15:40, 5 October 2021 (UTC)


 * Where is "Bella Union BELLACD55" referenced?
 * Removed. Roniius  talk to me 15:40, 5 October 2021 (UTC)

That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 18:47, 4 October 2021 (UTC)