Talk:The El Dorado/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Bruxton (talk · contribs) 17:41, 18 February 2024 (UTC)

Review

 * I look forward to reviewing this article.

Lead

 * "The base contains several small setbacks to comply with the 1916 Zoning Resolution." I did not find this information in the body.
 * I've removed the 1916 Zoning Resolution, as it's not actually mentioned in the article. Epicgenius (talk) 23:43, 18 February 2024 (UTC)
 * "Two towers rise from the eastern portion of the base above the 19th story." i did not find this information int he body
 * I've fixed this. The architecture section says "two 12-story towers rise from the eastern portion of the base." Epicgenius (talk) 23:43, 18 February 2024 (UTC)
 * All other facts are supported by citations in the body. The lead is a good summary of the article.

Images

 * The article has eight images and they are clear, and properly licensed. The images also appear in the sections where they illustrate the content of the text. Bruxton (talk) 17:55, 18 February 2024 (UTC)

Spelling and grammar

 * Site section "The Majestic Apartments occupies a nearly square land lot" I am unsure how this fits in the article. Might need to add context or a set up in the paragraph?
 * Oops, I meant "El Dorado". Epicgenius (talk) 23:48, 18 February 2024 (UTC)
 * Architecture section "while Margon & Holder were responsible for building's Art Deco" missing a word
 * Fixed. Epicgenius (talk) 23:43, 18 February 2024 (UTC)
 * Base section "an incised geometric pattern. On the third story." might be an errant period here
 * I think this was already changed to a comma before I started editing the article. Epicgenius (talk) 23:43, 18 February 2024 (UTC)
 * Towers section "There are terracotta balconies at the 26th story" might read better with "on"?
 * Fixed. Epicgenius (talk) 23:43, 18 February 2024 (UTC)
 * Cooperative conversion section "Balconies in central grouping of upper stories" are we missing a determiner before central?
 * Fixed. Epicgenius (talk) 23:43, 18 February 2024 (UTC)

Other

 * Development - $ at first occurrence US$8.5 million MOS:MONEY also Someone educated me on MOS:MONEY - I still think it is a minor "best practice" but the guideline does not say it is needed in this article
 * Consider adding inflation templates US$62.50 1963 . I find them interesting Bruxton (talk) 13:27, 19 February 2024 (UTC)