Talk:The Entire History of You

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Un-redirected
Per WP:PARENDIS, the title of this article should be The Entire History of You. Copied and pasted back from The Entire History of You (Black Mirror) since move was made impossible. This was the only edit since the original spurious copy-paste. Lagrange613 03:02, 4 May 2016 (UTC)

Grammar issue I can't fix without more info
"a memory of he and Ffion having sex about 18 months ago": the "he" should be either "him" or "himself" (as in the simpler phrase "a memory of him having sex"), but does it refer to Jonas or to Liam? I can't remember how the episode went. Equinox ◑ 11:20, 21 April 2018 (UTC)
 * It refers to Jonas. Which is correct for this—"him" or "himself"? I would find both confusing; it might be better to reword the sentence to name Jonas explicitly (while avoiding repetition of his name). Would this work: "Liam replays the last few memories before the crash to figure out what happened. He discovers that Jonas had a memory of having sex with Ffion"? Even this might be a bit difficult for a reader to parse though. — Bilorv(c)(talk) 12:36, 21 April 2018 (UTC)

Potential image improvements
To support the information from Inside Black Mirror about the episode being set in 2050 and the houses being designed around a "mid-century feel" of stone, wood and metal, we could use something like, which also shows the usage of the grain technology (I can perhaps find a slightly better frame than that one). To depict the grain tech itself and a little bit of the "tree rings" design, we could have a simple frame of the grain being used e.g. or even a composite of a person's milky eyes and their grain feed. — Bilorv ( talk ) 10:19, 17 May 2020 (UTC)