Talk:The FP

Feedback
Hi,. Here is some feedback: Thanks, Erik (talk &#124; contrib) (ping me) 20:08, 4 February 2014 (UTC)
 * 1) The opening sentence in the lead section is pretty long. Maybe separate the "supporting performances" part into a second sentence?
 * 2) Some quotation marks' placements may need to be fixed per MOS:QUOTEMARKS.
 * 3) The SXSW premiere sentence can stand alone. For consistency, is there not a date for Cinefamily? Also, Fantasia Festival can be linked.
 * 4) You could move mention of Drafthouse's acquisition to "Box office" since it is directly related to the theatrical run. Also, in the lead section, you mentioned that it was the second film acquired, following Four Lions. Is this detail highlighted in a reference? If so, it should be in the article body too.
 * 5) The "Box office" section is too slim. I recommend restructuring the release-based information so there is a good balance to content. For example, you could have a "Release" section with all the film festival screenings and theatrical run information, then have a "Critical reception" section separate from it. They are only related in the sense that the reviews were published at the time of the film's release, but a review could be written at the time or later, so it's not a strong or necessary relationship.
 * 6) If you want, you can put in more theatrical run detail from Box Office Mojo, like how it went down to 8 theaters in the second weekend, and how long the whole run lasted.
 * 7) For "References", you can add "|30em" to the template. This will allow the references to be in columns, depending on the width of the reader's browser.
 * 8) You do not have to state the publisher in citation templates if the work itself is notable (blue-linked).
 * 9) The official site is sufficient; I believe that official social media websites are discouraged unless they are the only option available.
 * 10) Do you plan to add a "Plot" section? If not anytime soon, you could reference the official synopsis (if one exists) and paraphrase it in neutral language, or even just quote a review.


 * I'll reply to these in order:
 * Fixed.
 * Which ones exactly? I read through the MOS but I'm not sure I see any issues.
 * Fixed, and the lack of a Cinefamily date was an oversight. Fantasia Festival was already linked in the section, didn't want to double link it.
 * Done, and removed the Four Lions tidbit as there isn't a reference relating to it.
 * I've been under the impression that standard practice was to have all reception underneath the release section. Not changing that yet, but will consider. Added to the box office section as well.
 * Done.
 * Done.
 * Are you sure about that? I've always seen both works and publishers on every article I've edited, regardless of the work's notability. I've been wrong before, but I'm raising an eyebrow here.
 * Removed Facebook.
 * I do once I get ahold of the film. I haven't watched it yet, and I haven't found it anywhere nearby or for a cheap price. I've sourced the official synopsis from the Drafthouse website and reworded it to what I believe to be a sufficient level.
 * Thank you very much for all your help, . You'll notice the two areas I was questioning are not exactly giant concerns, but any info on why/if I'm wrong is always nice so I don't make the mistake again. Thank you again!  Corvoe  (speak to me)  02:00, 5 February 2014 (UTC)
 * You're welcome! Regarding quotation marks, let me do some copy-editing at some point to show examples. As for works and publishers, Template:Cite news says publishers are not normally used for periodicals. Hope that helps. Otherwise, nice job! Erik (talk &#124; contrib) (ping me) 02:36, 5 February 2014 (UTC)
 * Thank you, and good to know. Will revise.  Corvoe  (speak to me)  02:56, 5 February 2014 (UTC)
 * Have you considered taking this article to WP:DYK to qualify it for appearing in the DYK section of the Main Page? Erik (talk &#124; contrib) (ping me) 13:09, 5 February 2014 (UTC)
 * No, but I'd be interested to. Any ideas for a hook? I can't think of anything.  Corvoe  (speak to me)  13:35, 5 February 2014 (UTC)
 * Actually, would you be willing to nominate it? Considering that I didn't even know there was a DYK process prior to right now, I'm wildly untrained in the area.  Corvoe  (speak to me)  13:51, 5 February 2014 (UTC)
 * I think you can keep the hook simple and mention the inspiration by Dance Dance Revolution. That's probably the most interesting aspect of this topic. As for nominating, it appears that you will need to review another nomination in the process of posting yours. A quid pro quo process, if you will. I can help out if you have any trouble. You can start with instructions at Template talk:Did you know. Erik (talk &#124; contrib) (ping me) 14:35, 5 February 2014 (UTC)
 * I nominated it.  Corvoe  (speak to me)  17:19, 5 February 2014 (UTC)

187
I linked 187 to 187 (slang) since readers outside the US might be unaware of the slang meaning. The film is made and set in California so it's probably not a coincidence.

Roches (talk) 14:06, 17 February 2014 (UTC)

GA status
Why is this article categorised as a Good Article when it clearly failed its review here? Its reviewer, closed the review with the remark, "Don't think it's ready for Good status yet, don't know how to resolve the image issue. But it's not far away." If this isn't resolved or there's no discussion in 24 hrs I'm going to boldly remove the GA category from the article. Cheers, Baffle gab1978 (talk) 20:36, 26 June 2014 (UTC)


 * That must look really confusing, poor planning on our behalf. The conversation was (more or less) moved to his talk page (now archived). We worked out more issues there, and he passed it himself. Sorry about that!  Corvoe  (speak to me)  20:59, 26 June 2014 (UTC)
 * I've copied the conversation from his page to the GA review page.  Corvoe  (speak to me)  21:42, 26 June 2014 (UTC)
 * Thanks for replying Corvoe; yes I did think it was rather odd. I'm happy the review was properly passed, thank you for moving the review text to the proper place. Hopefully it will avoid similar confusion in future. :-) Cheers, Baffle gab1978 (talk) 22:01, 26 June 2014 (UTC)
 * Sorry I haven't responded to your message, was a bit busy today. In the interim, I see you found where it was passed to GA status, and my apologies regarding where the conversation was, I'm still relatively new to this.  And thanks for your copy edit work on the article.  Onel5969 (talk) 22:50, 26 June 2014 (UTC)


 * Thank you for drawing attention to it. Also, thank you for the copy-editing! I wasn't entirely sure you were finished so I was going to wait until then. You've helped out a lot!  Corvoe  (speak to me)  00:28, 27 June 2014 (UTC)

Today's Featured Article
This article is currently nominated for Today's Featured Article. To view the nomination page and leave your comments, click here. Thank you!  Sock  (pka Corvoe) (be heard)(my stuff) 13:44, 29 July 2014 (UTC)

Gas Station Demolished?
Under the photo of the old Texaco station it says that it's been demolished, but I live in Frazier Park and it's still there. It has a fence around it now and it's been painted beige. It's still unused, but still there.WertMooMoo (talk) 08:06, 30 August 2014 (UTC)
 * Sorry for the late reply. That information was based on one of Jason Trost's statements in the commentary. I did some more digging and found that it is, in fact, still standing. Thank you for catching this! Sock   ( tock talk)  14:45, 18 September 2014 (UTC)

Sure! Glad to help.WertMooMoo (talk) 07:52, 22 September 2014 (UTC)

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