Talk:The Fear (Lily Allen song)/GA1

GA Review
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{{GAList2 }} -- ThinkBlue   (Hit   BLUE)  18:54, 9 September 2009 (UTC)
 * overcom=This article is in decent shape, but it needs more work before it becomes a Good Article.
 * 1a=???
 * 1acom= In the lead and in the Background section, "Initially, the song "Everyone's At It" was supposed to be released as the lead single from the album", remove "supposed", not very encyclopedic to have. A suggestion in the lead, maybe replacing "famous" with "recognized", since "famous" is a peacock term, just a suggestion. In the Background, maybe adding "British" between "daily" and "tabloid", since you do mention that Allen goes after the British newspapers in the lead. In the Critical reception section, "...but, given her own personal tabloid history (i.e. scandals)", is this ---> "(i.e. scandals}" needed? In the Live performances and promotion section, see if you can spot anything wrong with this sentence ---> "...Allen talked about talked about her struggles with the paparazzi and also premiered the song by performing it live." Same section, "Firday Ross" ---> "Friday Ross". Same section, "In February", what year? Same section, replace "Ellen" with "DeGeneres". Same section, "campain" ---> "campaign".
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 * 1b=???
 * 1bcom= In the lead, "however, it was ultimately decided on "The Fear" to be released on 26 January, 2009 by Regal Recordings" ---> "however, it was ultimately decided on "The Fear" to be released on 26 January 2009 by Regal Recordings", no need for the comma after January, per here. Do the same in the Music video section. In the Critical reception section, "...and went on to say that it's in fact" ---> "...and went on to say that it is in fact", per here. Since this is a British article, the dates need to be consistent; the Commercial performance section is what I'm referring to. Linking "£" might help.
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 * 2acom=NME and The Skinny need to be italicized, since both are magazines.
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 * 2b=y
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 * 2ccom=Are "Music Lovers Group" and "I Like Music" reliable sources?
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 * 3a=y
 * 3b=y
 * 4=y
 * 5=y
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 * 6acom=File:Lily Allen - The Fear.jpg needs a lower resolution.
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 * 6b=y
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 * 7com=If the statements above can be answered, I will pass the article. Good luck with improving this article!
 * I resolved all problems except the one with the two sources. I Like Music seems like a good source to me, though the other one looks like a self-published source. I will look for substitutes for both of them, I hope I can find somehting. --12345abcxyz20082009 (talk) 19:58, 9 September 2009 (UTC)
 * OK, I've substituted both sources. Hope everything is good now and thank you for the lovely review :) --12345abcxyz20082009 (talk) 21:12, 9 September 2009 (UTC)
 * Everything is in order. Alright, thank you to 12345abcxyz20082009 for getting the stuff I left at the talk page, because I have gone off and placed the article as GA. Congrats. ;) -- ThinkBlue   (Hit   BLUE)  16:40, 10 September 2009 (UTC)