Talk:The Fight (The Office)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Dom497 (talk · contribs) 16:32, 16 June 2012 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality:
 * Quality of article is good.
 * B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
 * See comment section below. Article now complies with MoS.
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. References to sources:
 * This section is good.
 * B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
 * References are included where needed.
 * C. No original research:
 * No original research found.
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * Major aspects of the topic are covered.''
 * B. Focused:
 * The article remains focused throughout.
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * No bias found.
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * Article is stable.
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * All tags on the images within the article are tagged properly. Infobox picture has a fair use rationale.
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * Images are provided where possible and the captions are suitable.
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * See comment section below. Pass!

Comments

 * "At the end of the day, Michael promotes Dwight from Assistant to the Regional Manager to Assistant Regional Manager", I don't understand what you are trying to say. Can you please clarify?


 * "Eventually, she vented her frustration by "practically knock[ing]", whats the need of the "ing" in hard brackets?

The article will be on hold for 7 days. If you have any questions feel free to post them here or on my talk page.--Dom497 (talk) 18:25, 16 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Thanks for the review. I tried to clear up the first issue. It's rather hard to explain in words, but basically Dwight is "Assistant to the Regional Manager", ie a personal assistant. He dreams of being "Assistant Regional Manager", which is the second in command at the branch. Although the titles are similar, they are vastly different, and there's a lot of jokes about Dwight saying he's Assistant Regional Manager, when he's really just "Assistant to the Regional Manager". As for the second one, I put it in brackets because the original quote was "practically knocked", which didn't fit in with the grammar of the reworded sentence. Hope that helps!--Gen. Quon (talk) 04:19, 17 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Makes sense.--Dom497 (talk) 23:53, 17 June 2012 (UTC)