Talk:The Fight Before Christmas (The Simpsons)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: SCB '92 (talk · contribs) 12:03, 8 November 2011 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

Looks fine, just a few flaws though
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * "falls to sleep" should be changed to "falls asleep", and there should be a "to" so to read "Martha Stewart asking for her help to save the family's Christmas"
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * okay
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * good
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * fine
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * no problems here
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * I really think there should be a screenshot of the episode in the infobox; it might be absent because of the limit reached of using non-free images in the article, but still
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * It'd be harsh to fail this article, so I'm passing it
 * I fixed the problems. Thanks for the review! :) Theleftorium (talk) 16:34, 8 November 2011 (UTC)