Talk:The First Day of the Rest of Your Life (The Walking Dead)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Soaper1234 (talk · contribs) 14:34, 22 March 2021 (UTC)

Hello. I'm going to review this article. I shall give comments in the coming days. Soaper1234 - talk  14:34, 22 March 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * The callback mentioned in the caption is not mentioned, and therefore sourced, anywhere else in the article. It should either be removed or mentioned and sourced.
 * All characters should have full names on first mention.
 * Add a comma after captivity.
 * "in order to kill Negan (Jeffrey Dean Morgan) reanimated" does not makes sense to me.
 * All Out War arc is not explained anywhere, but I've looked around and believe it is the stories of the next season. If this is right, I would change "Further storylines include the start of the build-up to the All Out War arc" → "The episode also includes the build-up to the following season's storylines".
 * Remove "Sonequa" and "as Sasha Williams" from third paragraph; already mentioned.
 * "This episode was also dedicated"
 * Add the in-memory information to production and move the source there.
 * All ✅  Some Dude From North Carolina  (talk) 17:47, 22 March 2021 (UTC)

Plot

 * All characters should have full names on first mention.
 * The plot lacks context, so the average reader who has not seen the show may find it hard to follow. You need to provide context about the characters and the locations on first mention (e.g., who is Dwight?, what are Saviors?, who are Abraham and Maggie?, what is a walker?).
 * Carl needs an actor and wikilinking.
 * Comma needed after losses.
 * "note from Dwight that he was" → "note from Dwight, explaining that he was"
 * All ✅  Some Dude From North Carolina  (talk) 17:47, 22 March 2021 (UTC)

Production

 * First paragraph has no sources.
 * Add "Writer" before Scott M. Gimple
 * "on Talking Dead → "on aftershow Talking Dead"
 * Add a reference after "weeks before"."
 * "Although Tyreese is not mentioned" → "Although Sasha's brother, Tyreese, is not mentioned"
 * All ✅  Some Dude From North Carolina  (talk) 17:47, 22 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Now that Scott M. Gimple has been removed from the prose, he needs mentioning for the quote. Change "She said that "Scott did tell me is that it would be heroic and sacrificial..." → "She said that writer Scott M. Gimple had told her Sasha's death would be "heroic and sacrificial...""

Reception

 * "an unforgettable sendoff Sunday night" → "an unforgettable sendoff Sunday night "
 * ✅  Some Dude From North Carolina  (talk) 17:47, 22 March 2021 (UTC)