Talk:The Food Album/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 19:08, 24 July 2013 (UTC)

Comments A few issues so I'll put this GAN on hold for a week. The Rambling Man (talk) 16:56, 26 July 2013 (UTC)
 * " Scotti Brothers Records" link the whole title of the record label.
 * "The released features ten" no need for the d.
 * "preference, and the latter" -> "preference while the latter"
 * "to purchase or own" how would one "own" it without purchasing it?
 * Link certified.
 * "1982 – 1992" (in infobox) should be "1982–92" per WP:YEAR.
 * " and the latest song being" switch "latest" with "most recent".
 * "Yankovic's first eponymous album" is there a link for it?
 * "which is why similar compilations were not released" reads a little odd. "which prevented the release of further compilations..." or similar?
 * "failed to chart, however, it sold steadily." I would have preferred a semi-colon rather than the first comma.
 * "and go Gold." -> "and be certified gold"
 * Link Robert Palmer on the first usage.
 * Certifications table doesn't need to be sortable.
 * Refs - why suddenly Scotti Bros? Use consistent terminology throughout.
 * Thanks for taking a look at this. I think I addressed all of your concerns.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   23:24, 26 July 2013 (UTC)
 * One thing left that's only just struck me, "Track listing" has significant overlinking issues. Otherwise, it's a very nice piece of work.  The Rambling Man (talk) 16:20, 27 July 2013 (UTC)
 * How does it look now?-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   17:30, 27 July 2013 (UTC)
 * It looks good Gen! The Rambling Man (talk) 17:45, 27 July 2013 (UTC)