Talk:The Fugitive Kind

Rewrite!
"Val succumbs to the charms of Lady, who plans to set him up with a refreshment bar..."

No wonder Val succumbs; he's wanted to run a refreshment bar all his life. Seriously... No doubt the statement is literally correct, but it sounds Really Dumb. It needs rethinking and rewriting. WilliamSommerwerck (talk) 21:45, 31 December 2010 (UTC)


 * The sentence sounds just fine to me.
 * We are dealing with Williams here, and a 1950s film. The sentence suits its subject matter.
 * We want this to read more like a description of American Pie Presents Band Camp? Anachronistically?
 * I have 100 plot summaries over at the IMDb. It is standard practice to adopt a style which conforms to the material at hand.
 * You're not going to use the same language writing about The Song of Bernadette and Rob Zombie's Halloween.
 * Varlaam (talk) 21:40, 29 August 2011 (UTC)