Talk:The Gambia at the 2012 Summer Olympics/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Miyagawa (talk · contribs) 11:10, 16 October 2016 (UTC)

Grabbing this for a review.


 * Lead: I feel like there's a missing word after required in "by setting a qualifying time that fell within the required and the latter"
 * added "standard" MWright96 (talk) 11:50, 16 October 2016 (UTC)
 * Background: Link 1984 Summer Olympics
 * ✅ MWright96 (talk) 11:50, 16 October 2016 (UTC)
 * "an delegation led by the" - should be "a delegation"
 * ✅ MWright96 (talk) 11:50, 16 October 2016 (UTC)
 * Athletics: "He had previously competed in the" - you can drop the "had"
 * ✅ MWright96 (talk) 11:50, 16 October 2016 (UTC)
 * In the two sentences where you list the other competitors in the heats (for both athletes), I think it'd be better if you said which country each athlete was representing. You've worked it in for a couple of them, but not all.
 * ✅ MWright96 (talk) 11:50, 16 October 2016 (UTC)
 * You can trim the N/A line from the key since it isn't used in the tables.
 * ✅ MWright96 (talk) 11:50, 16 October 2016 (UTC)
 * References: Removed the italics and the dashes from Sports Reference
 * ✅ MWright96 (talk) 11:50, 16 October 2016 (UTC)

Otherwise, all good, and these are just nitpicks anyway. Good job! Miyagawa (talk) 11:10, 16 October 2016 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review Miyagawa. I've made the above changes you've suggested. MWright96 (talk) 11:50, 16 October 2016 (UTC)
 * Great, happy to promote. Miyagawa (talk) 14:34, 16 October 2016 (UTC)