Talk:The Game (mind game)/GA3

GA Review
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Reviewer: TheQ Editor (talk · contribs) 21:11, 11 November 2014 (UTC)

I'll review this. It'll be sad how many times I will lose the game while reviewing it though. Expect at most a week for me to finish reviewing this. Thanks,  ΤheQ Editor   Talk? 21:11, 11 November 2014 (UTC)

Lead

 * "in several different countries" should be "in different countries"


 * "A number of tactics" - should be "Tactics"

Gameplay

 * FN 3 doesn't say anything about "However, one reported variation states that The Game ends..."
 * It says "some players claim it ends only when the prime minister announces The Game is up on TV" — I've changed the article to read


 * Don't all strategies focus on making others lose?
 * Removed the word "most"


 * Last few sentences of paragraph 1 in Strategies is uncited.
 * Okay, I've changed that section slightly.


 * In here, it states another variation is that if you completely forget about The Game, then you win.
 * Mentioned.


 * "several petitions" should be "petitions"

Origins

 * "did not fit with "game theory"" should be "did not fit with the "game theory""


 * "Paul Taylor in 2002" should be "Paul Taylor in August 2002"

Psychology

 * "There are many early examples" - should be "There are early examples"

Reception

 * "Several newspapers" should be "newspapers"


 * ""You lose The Game"" - should be ""You Lose The Game"" according to the sign.

Other

 * Would it be helpful if you link to Paradox too in the See Also section?
 * Nice idea — I've added it.


 * FN 12 resulted in a connection failure. Sources do not have to be online but if it can be fixed, then it would be even better.
 * The site only seems to have changed addresses very recently... anyway, I've fixed it.

I was able to review this quickly due to its size and most of the sources are online. Once the issues are fixed, I will have another look through. If there are no other problems spotted, then it gets promoted! Thanks,  ΤheQ Editor   Talk? 22:03, 11 November 2014 (UTC)
 * Okay, I've responded to your comments. Bilorv (Talk)(Contribs) 22:59, 11 November 2014 (UTC)

They forgot to mention it above, but the TheQ formally passed the article at 21:12, 12 November 2014‎. — Llywelyn II   13:11, 19 January 2015 (UTC)