Talk:The God Complex/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Gen. Quon (talk · contribs) 00:52, 9 April 2012 (UTC)

Just a few issues:
 * Plot: "before they end up killed" I would put 'getting' before 'killed'
 * Plot: "Gifting them with a new house and new car" I think you can remove the iteration of 'new' before car
 * Reception: "beaten by direct competition" I would change 'competition' to 'competitor'
 * Reception: It's not a huge deal, but I think 'mixed to positive' reads a little easier than 'positive to mixed', IMHO
 * Reception: "io9's Charlie Jane Anders was more positive" The sentence right before this quote was not negative, so the 'more positive' remark should probably be removed and replaced with 'positive as well' or something
 * Reception: "Neela Debnath, writing for The Independent, also gave a positive reviews" Reviews should just be 'review'

Only those small issues. On hold for seven days to straighten those out!--Gen. Quon (talk) 02:48, 9 April 2012 (UTC)
 * I believe I have fixed everything. Thanks for the review! Glimmer721  talk  00:36, 10 April 2012 (UTC)
 * Excellent work. I pass!--Gen. Quon (talk) 02:25, 10 April 2012 (UTC)