Talk:The Good Huswifes Jewell/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 13:59, 5 April 2016 (UTC)

Will get to this in a day or two. Superb one, as always! Sainsf &lt;^&gt; Feel at home 13:59, 5 April 2016 (UTC)


 * Thank you for taking this on! Chiswick Chap (talk) 14:14, 5 April 2016 (UTC)


 * In Lead:
 * Would be good to add a word about who Dawson is although you link him.
 * Added a gloss. Chiswick Chap (talk)


 * In Context:
 * with for example locally-grown Should this not use commas like "with, for example, locally-grown" ?
 * Done. Chiswick Chap (talk) 14:32, 6 April 2016 (UTC)


 * Just curious, does "Medieval" mean the same as "Middle Ages" here? Can we use any one term?
 * It's basically the only available adjective for "of the Middle Ages". Chiswick Chap (talk) 14:32, 6 April 2016 (UTC)


 * In Overview:
 * In the first few lines, it should be clear that "he" refers to the author.
 * Said "Dawson". Chiswick Chap (talk) 14:32, 6 April 2016 (UTC)


 * In Approach:
 * Is the term "goal" is linked to not a bit too technical for our purpose?
 * Removed link. Chiswick Chap (talk) 14:32, 6 April 2016 (UTC)


 * The "hearbes" link in the quote is a duplicate.
 * Removed link. Chiswick Chap (talk) 14:32, 6 April 2016 (UTC)


 * In Reception:
 * Elizabethan is linked twice, and both are duplinks.
 * Removed links. Chiswick Chap (talk) 14:32, 6 April 2016 (UTC)


 * Who is Opaskar?
 * Glossed. Chiswick Chap (talk) 14:32, 6 April 2016 (UTC)


 * Link violet a bit earlier, at first mention.
 * Done. Chiswick Chap (talk) 14:32, 6 April 2016 (UTC)

That should be it. An interesting read, would make a great GA. Sainsf  &lt;^&gt; Feel at home 09:23, 6 April 2016 (UTC)

Cool, ready for promotion! Sainsf &lt;^&gt; Feel at home 15:18, 6 April 2016 (UTC)