Talk:The Grand Babylon Hotel

Serious grammatical problems
The narrative in this article switches randomly between past and present. Needs fixing. 212.159.59.5 (talk) 19:11, 25 January 2009 (UTC)

It is also overly detailed and cuts off suddenly.Saxophobia (talk) 15:59, 3 September 2009 (UTC)

Story

 * http://www.ibiblio.org/eldritch/ab/gbh.htm
 * Kenixkil (talk) 19:01, 6 April 2023 (UTC)