Talk:The Great Battle (film)

Is this article well-written Sean1084 (talk) 12:52, 6 November 2023 (UTC)

Wiki Education assignment: WRIT 1150-26, Writing for Others
— Assignment last updated by Sean1084 (talk) 13:22, 13 November 2023 (UTC)

Edits I'm going to make
I’m planning on making some changes to the article called The Great Battle (Film). I would first like to add a few sentences in the lead section that correspond to each of the subsections within the article such as premise, cast, production, release, box office and reception. I will be also adding information about positive critics in the reception section because the article only contains negative critics of the movie, which may convey biased reaction of the movie. I also hope to provide historical context of an actual battle by using information from Korea encyclopedia. In this way, readers who read this article will have a better understanding of the context behind the movie. Finally, I will These changes will address concept gaps within the article and by addressing these issues, the article would provide more thorough information to the readers. Sean1084 (talk) 13:53, 15 November 2023 (UTC)