Talk:The Harbingers/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Wizardman  Operation Big Bear 04:37, 29 December 2010 (UTC)

I'll review this article shortly. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 04:37, 29 December 2010 (UTC)

Here are the issues I found:
 * I'm concerned about the heavy referencing in the lead. As the lead is supposed to be a summary of the article, references should be minimal, as they would be discussed further and ref'd later. I took one out that wasn't needed, and I'm sure more can be cut.
 * "Players must collect the six Keystones of different colour to win" colours.
 * "Hellin is evil infant trouble-maker" is an evil infant
 * Capitalization varies between Numb skull and Numb Skull. Make it consistent.
 * "Chantraine. and a Numb skull" comma
 * "The Harbingers became one of the top ten best selling games in America and UK, within months of its release." does this mean both Americas or just North?
 * "two booster tapes was released." were

I'll put the article on hold and will pass it when the issues are fixed. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 04:25, 3 January 2011 (UTC)


 * ✅, thanks for the review. -- d'oh! [talk] 23:56, 3 January 2011 (UTC)

Looks good. One thing I would add, if you can find it, if if there's any release information in Australia, since that's where the game originated. Anyway, I'll pass the article as a GA. Wizardman  Operation Big Bear 03:40, 4 January 2011 (UTC)