Talk:The Heart Is a Lonely Hunter (Once Upon a Time)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Gen. Quon (talk · contribs) 19:48, 21 April 2012 (UTC)

Those are the only issues. On hold for seven days.--Gen. Quon (talk) 20:27, 27 April 2012 (UTC)
 * Picture: What's the importance of the picture? Add a better rationale on the pictures page
 * Intro: link 'first season'
 * Intro: "fairytale past" is used two sentences in a row
 * Production: 'The character of Sheriff Graham was killed off in "The Heart Is a Lonely Hunter", something that actor Jamie Dornan had known would happen since ABC picked up the pilot.' I think since this is the episode, you could just say, 'In the episode, the character of Sheriff Graham was killed off, something that actor Jamie Dornan had known would happen since ABC picked up the pilot.'
 * Reviews: This is just a little pet peeve of mine, but maybe move the blue box up to the top of the first paragraph, because there are three little words that spill over and it bothers me. ;)
 * References: Reference 6 seems to have a weird bracket issue
 * Hi, thanks for the review. I'll get to fixing these and those in the other GA review tomorrow or Sunday. Thanks,  Ruby  2010/  2013  23:29, 27 April 2012 (UTC)
 * No problem. Will wait till then.--Gen. Quon (talk) 04:01, 28 April 2012 (UTC)
 * All fixed! I removed the screenshot, as I couldn't find anything to justify its presence. Maybe when I have time I'll try to find a better one. Thanks for the review!  Ruby  2010/  2013  03:10, 30 April 2012 (UTC)
 * OK, all ready to pass! :)--Gen. Quon (talk) 03:43, 30 April 2012 (UTC)