Talk:The Heart of Me (song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 14:45, 3 April 2020 (UTC)

Infobox

 * Needs alt
 * Alt added. Not sure it's great though - what animal even is that? Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 20:09, 9 April 2020 (UTC)
 * A collourful moose. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 20:43, 9 April 2020 (UTC)

Lead

 * the song charted on Billboard's Spotify Viral 50 chart at number 48. → remove see below
 * removed Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 20:09, 9 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Atlantic subsequently sent it → Subsequently, Atlantic Records sent the song (as it is the first mention)
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 20:09, 9 April 2020 (UTC)

Background

 * (also registered as "Heart of Me" with BMI) → source doesn't work and is it really important? I mean the album credits are much more relevant and have the actual name of the song.
 * removed Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 20:09, 9 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Just a question do you have the name of the studios?
 * It's possible the original nominator does. I sadly couldn't find it. Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 20:09, 9 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Please mention Kevin Grainger and S. Vaughan Merrick, they are as valuable as the others.
 * added. Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 20:09, 9 April 2020 (UTC)

Composition and lyrics

 * In the chorus, Wyatt sings "Look away, take the back door to / The heart of me / Because I can't believe / That anything's cool anymore" → what's the point of this?
 * I agree - removed Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 20:09, 9 April 2020 (UTC)

Release

 * In the issue dated 12 March 2016 of Billboard, "The Heart of Me" made its chart debut at number 48 on the Spotify Viral 50 chart,[23] which measured the top songs on streaming service Spotify with the most sharing and social activity in the United States. The song was listed on the chart for a week. → irrelevant, it is not a chart that is used in wikipedia. See Billboard Charts.
 * Removed Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 20:09, 9 April 2020 (UTC)

Critical reception

 * Add "received generally positive reviews from music critics" → link music critics to musi journalism
 * Is this in the lede? I added something to this section saying this. Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 20:09, 9 April 2020 (UTC)
 * I would let the "best song of the week" and "best of the year" in a diferent paragraph.
 * I'm not sure what this means Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 20:09, 9 April 2020 (UTC)

Track listing

 * Use so there is the right space between the tracks and the lenght of the same.
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 20:09, 9 April 2020 (UTC)

Credits and personnel

 * Same as preivous.
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 20:09, 9 April 2020 (UTC)

Release history

 * Fine

Overall

 * You can now adress the issues I pointed out. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 17:17, 9 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Per WT:GAN, I've made the changes above Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski  (talk • contribs) 20:09, 9 April 2020 (UTC)
 * First of all, thank you for responding so quickly. Secondly, I'm aware you are not the nominator and I made some small changes to the article, if you could see if you are ok with them it would help. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 21:24, 9 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Sorry I haven't been able to address this until now. Looks like Lee has finished the job, thanks! Pancake (talk) 08:55, 10 April 2020 (UTC)
 * All good with me. Didn't mean to take your thunder ;p Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 18:31, 10 April 2020 (UTC)