Talk:The Heart of Princess Joan

Maybe review the order of your table of contents. Put the plot summary closer to the top and less important information, such as the newspaper announcement, further down. Easywolf (talk) 00:43, 15 February 2013 (UTC)

We revised it! I was wondering about the order myself, so I was very happy to have your input! Thank you! Tootles91 (talk) 09:13, 16 February 2013 (UTC)

I suggest you clean up your links as some of them are repeated and should be listed under the same number to cause less clutter. A way to fix this is in your first link create a reference name : citation and then on the rest that are exactly the same as that citation you just add and no closure. Make sure to add the / and it will help tidy your page up. ~ — Preceding unsigned comment added by Nessyb (talk • contribs) 00:48, 15 February 2013 (UTC)

I will definitely try to see what I can do! Thanks for your input! ~

The summary of the short story should be in active voice instead of passive. You could remove the section on the published collections of Mary de Morgan as it seems out of place and add this information to the section on the author. ~ — Preceding unsigned comment added by Hm19921 (talk • contribs) 21:14, 15 February 2013 (UTC)

I think I'll leave that revision up to my partner, as it was one of their contributions. I think I will keep the 'published collections' section how it is, but I appreciate your input! ~