Talk:The Hidden People

Need better language
"He does not see or hear from her again, until 1862 when Albie's father tells him that Lizzie had been burnt to death by her husband." -- He doesn't see or hear from her in 1862, either. I'm inclined to change "until 1862 when" to "and in 1862", but am open to better ideas. -- Jibal (talk) 20:37, 19 July 2021 (UTC)
 * On second thought, I went ahead and made the change, which I think is fine. -- Jibal (talk) 20:41, 19 July 2021 (UTC)
 * You're right, he doesn't see her in 1862; 1851 was the last time he saw her. Thanks for fixing that, and for the couple of other changes you made. —Bruce1eetalk 21:29, 19 July 2021 (UTC)

DYK hits
Just out of interest, two of the secondary links in this article's DYK on the Main page yesterday attracted more hits than the primary DYK link.
 * The Hidden People 3,244
 * Changeling 4,653
 * Bridget Cleary 8,874
 * —Bruce1eetalk 10:18, 20 July 2021 (UTC)