Talk:The Hinckley School

Victuallers 18:55, 19 March 2007 (UTC)

Vandalism/Press Release
This article reads like a vandalised press release. It should be cleaned up or deleted. Martin Porcheron need help? just ask! 20:26, 30 June 2007 (UTC) martin porcheron you are sorly mistaken my feathered friend as john cleveland college is a wonder to the eyes and ears with its sporting and scientific achievements not to mention to the joy it is to have an indepth concersation with mr jamie phillips of the business studies/economics department!!! —Preceding unsigned comment added by 194.83.71.166 (talk) 09:23, 6 September 2007 (UTC)

I remember playing against John Cleveland at school, in the nineties. They were a very strong team. Our 1sts won, 2nds lost and U16's lost by over 80 points. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 92.2.170.57 (talk) 22:35, 23 April 2009 (UTC)

Press release
This article still reads likea press release, or at  any case in  a tone that  is just  a tad to  smooth  for an encyclopedia. There is clearly a COI because the article has been written either by  a member of the staff, or as a senior student  project.--Kudpung (talk) 14:35, 18 February 2010 (UTC)

Clean up
I've completely overhauled this article including  removal  of the POV & advertising and some other unsourced material. Many references are still required, esp for the history  section.--Kudpung (talk) 23:27, 18 February 2010 (UTC)