Talk:The Ice Age Adventures of Buck Wild/GA2

GA Review
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Reviewer: AryKun (talk · contribs) 12:53, 22 March 2022 (UTC)


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 * A truly horrendously animated movie that competes only with the likes of The Seven Deadly Sins' latter seasons.

Content

 * "spin-off of it" → Does "it" here refer to the franchise? The sentence should be reworded since this isn't very clear. ✅
 * "Pegg reprising his role as Buck Wild" → "Pegg (reprising his role as Buck Wild)" ✅
 * "...as a Disney+ original film." → This isn't mentioned in the body. ✅
 * "A sequel is in development." → But the quote in the body says that they're only thinking about whether to make one based on audience response, which hasn't been phenomenal, so I don't see how this is implied. ✅
 * The note in the infobox needs a reference. ✅
 * The plot summary is too long (650 words out of a total 1550) and should be reduced. ✅
 * Protoceratops and Tyrannosaurus should be italicized. ✅
 * "In June 2016, on the possibility of a sequel, Galen Tan Chu, co-director of Ice Age: Collision Course stated that there were some ideas for the sixth installment" → " On the possibility of a sequel, Galen Tan Chu, co-director of Ice Age: Collision Course, stated in June 2016 that there were some ideas for the sixth installment." ✅
 * Any information on release outside of the US and Canada? Like, I'd at least expect it for major markets like the UK, Europe, China (if Disney+ is there?), and India. ✅
 * "late-stage pre-viz pass" → "late-stage pre-viz [ previsualization ] pass" ✅
 * I'll do a prose review of the plot section after it's rewritten.
 * Id say it’s ready for this now
 * I've copy-edited the plot.

Images

 * The images are all licensed correctly.
 * Not required for GA, but consider adding alt text.