Talk:The Image of You/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Kyle Peake (talk · contribs) 07:24, 7 May 2020 (UTC)

So we meet again, will do this today. --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:24, 7 May 2020 (UTC)

Infobox and lead
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 * Target CD to Compact disc in the infobox
 * Add single chronology there for the artist
 * "is a song performed by Albanian" → "is a song by Albanian"
 * Mention the digital download release too
 * Remove wikilink to Emotion, as that is an obvious term
 * "The song represented Albania in" → ""The Image of You" represented Albania for"
 * "the pre-selection competition Festivali i Këngës with" → "the pre-selection competition, Festivali i Këngës, with" for target to the correct festival
 * "twenty four scoring a total of one hundred and six points" → "24, scoring a total of 106 points" per MOS:NUMBERS
 * Mention the performance of the song in the lead

Background and composition

 * Start this section off with mentioning who wrote and composed the original song
 * I want to keep this as in other articles--Lorik17 (talk) 22:07, 7 May 2020 (UTC)

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 * "In 2003, Anjeza Shahini was" → "In 2003, Shahini was"
 * "As part from the competition's rules" → "For following the competition's rules"
 * "The singer took part" → "Shahini took part"
 * "song "Dua të jem imazhi yt" composed by Edmond Zhulali and written by Agim Doçi" → "song "Dua të jem imazhi yt", composed by Zhulali and written by Doçi"
 * Give mention of the CD and 2018 releases in the background para too, since they don't belong in the comp one and mention the labels also
 * "Musically, the song is" → "Musically, the latter is"
 * Target rhythmic to Rhythm
 * Remove wikilink to Emotion
 * "in what appears to be a whirlwind" → "in what seems to be a whirlwind" or something similar so the lead and this aren't 100% identical
 * Last sentence should have a ref invoked at the end of it

Festivali i Këngës

 * Remove wikilink on Festivali i Këngës as you have done that earlier in the body
 * "to determine country's participant" → "to determine the country's participant"
 * Remove wikilink on Eurovision Song Contest 2004
 * "It consisted of two semi-finals" → "The former consisted of two semi-finals"
 * "on 18 and 19 December, and the grand final on 20 December 2003" → "on 18 and 19 December 2003, and the grand final on 20 December of that year"
 * "in which, Anjeza Shahini was chosen" → "which included Shahini being chosen"
 * "represent the country" → "represent Albania"
 * Img needs alt text and only to mention the surname Shahini with no wikilink

Istanbul
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 * Remove the target on 49th edition as that's already been wikilinked to
 * Remove wikilink on Istanbul per above
 * "on 12 May and the grand final on 15 May 2004" → "on 12 May 2004 and the grand final three days later"
 * "to the then-Eurovision rules" → "to the Eurovision rules at the time"
 * "except the host country" → "apart from the host country"
 * " and the " → ", and the "
 * "*"final, although, the top ten" → "final. However, the top ten"
 * "performed thirteenth in the semi-final" → "performed 13th in the semi-final"
 * "and qualified for the" → "while the country qualified for the"
 * "In the grand final, the country" → "In the grand final, Albania"
 * "in a field of twenty four with" → "in a field of 24, with"
 * Mention the performance was of the song and shouldn't this be mentioned before the 2012 ranking? If keeping it after, add a mention that it was the 2004 performance though. Also, a ref should be cited at the end of the performance's sentence.

Track listing
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 * Retitle to Track listings
 * You should only use the compilation CD ref for the CD track listing; the other is redundant

Release history
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 * Once again, only the refs should be centred; see my fix on "Hear My Plea" to understand how to do this
 * Cite the compilation CD source for the first release

Final comments and verdict

 * , nice work and I did notice similarities to "Hear My Plea", take on my tips when writing your articles in the future. --Kyle Peake (talk) 10:39, 7 May 2020 (UTC)
 * I made the changes you've requested.--Lorik17 (talk) 22:20, 7 May 2020 (UTC)
 * That's good, made a few minor edits myself but now it's ✅ time! --Kyle Peake (talk) 06:13, 8 May 2020 (UTC)