Talk:The Imitation Game/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 17:12, 17 May 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 17:12, 17 May 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * The "short description" should go above everything else per WP:ORDER.
 * The talk page says the article is written in British English so add that template.
 * The link for the BBFC reference had changed and should be updated.
 * That same reference should also not be in WP:ALLCAPS.
 * The second reference the "country" parameter should be properly cited and marked as dead.
 * Future sections name this a British film, so shouldn't that be mentioned in the infobox?
 * The budget reference is missing several parameters.
 * The Box Office Mojo source should go to the summary, not the domestic gross.
 * I would also recommend using the "cite Box Office Mojo" template.
 * The lead should summarize the entire article and is currently missing any mention of #Production.
 * For some reason Alan Turing is linked multiple times so remove the last few per WP:OVERLINK.
 * "cryptanalyst Alan Turing" "cryptanalyst Turing" (already mentioned)
 * The lead should also include a link to the awards list.

Plot and cast

 * The plot section is under 700 words so that passes WP:FILMPLOT.
 * Add a serial comma after Keith Furman.
 * "The team are" "The team is"
 * Remove the comma after "intercept the messages".
 * No issues with the cast section.