Talk:The Immortals of Meluha/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Wizardman  Operation Big Bear 04:39, 8 March 2011 (UTC)

I'll review this article shortly. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 04:39, 8 March 2011 (UTC)

Here are the issues I found:
 * "Tripathi had initially decided to write a book on the philosophy of evil, but was dissuaded by his family members. So he decided" comma instead of period.
 * "Tripathi even changed publisher" either 'changed publishers' or 'changed his publisher'
 * "although some of them noted that Tripathi's writing tend to lose focus at some parts of the story." tended to
 * "Shiva and his troop" troops
 * The plot section feels a bit long, but if there's nowhere to cut without impacting the story then I won't worry about it.
 * "After talking to him as Shiva comes out of the temple, he hears a scream. Running to the location he sees in horror as a group of Nagas kidnap Sati and run with them." that seems very abrupt. Is that how the novel actually ends? Since it's a trilogy it probably is, but that's likely worth noting.
 * The quote box needs a citation.
 * "They suggested that Tripathi write a thriller/adventure novel, and the philosophy should be a part of the story, hence there would be a mainstream appeal in it." a cite would be nice for this.
 * "they already had the celebrity preview attached to it," do you mean celebrity purview.
 * "In total the book has sold around 75,000 copies making it" comma after copies.

I'll put the article on hold for a week and will pass it when the issues are fixed. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 05:19, 8 March 2011 (UTC)
 * The user that promoted this to GA is on a break from Wikipedia due to a serious injury, I took the liberty to fix all the errors you pointed out. Thanks for reviewing it!--Blackjacks101 (talk) 00:16, 9 March 2011 (UTC)
 * Thanks for doing that. Since everything's been fixed, I will pass the article as a GA. Wizardman  Operation Big Bear 01:24, 9 March 2011 (UTC)