Talk:The Incredible Hulk Coaster/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Dom497 (talk · contribs) 02:20, 8 December 2013 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


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 * A. Prose is "clear and concise", without copyvios, or spelling and grammar errors:
 * B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
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 * B. Citation to reliable sources where necessary:
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Comments

 * Probably should mention that IOA is at the Universal Florida Resort in Orlando, Florida.
 * Done Themeparkgc   Talk  03:07, 8 December 2013 (UTC)


 * "...with a Hulk theme being selected for a roller coaster" - Ref doesn't seem say that the Hulk theme was for a roller coaster at the time.
 * Changed to "thrill ride". Themeparkgc   Talk  03:07, 8 December 2013 (UTC)


 * "On-site construction of Islands of Adventure began in 1997" - The ref doesn't say when construction started just that it was under construction. There's probably a better ref somewhere.
 * I don't know if there is a better reference. I have reworded to match that of the reference. Themeparkgc   Talk  03:07, 8 December 2013 (UTC)


 * "...and is illuminated green at night" - Is this supported by ref 6?
 * Yes Themeparkgc   Talk  03:07, 8 December 2013 (UTC)


 * Ref 8 redirects.
 * I've removed the link. Since it was just to the homepage of the site, I doubt it would have been anything more than a way for someone to identify the company in an older revision of the article. Themeparkgc   Talk  03:07, 8 December 2013 (UTC)


 * If you can find a source, maybe include that B&M refused to make the launch and that is why the launch was sub-contracted.
 * I think it is only discussion forums, so we won't really know if it is true or not. I know we are 1.5 decades into the future but I believe B&M have said publicly that they will build a launch coaster if a park asks for one. Themeparkgc   Talk  03:07, 8 December 2013 (UTC)


 * Maybe include the heart attack from 2003 in the history section? (or is a heart attack not really important as it doesn't look like the person died)-- Dom497 ( talk ) 02:44, 8 December 2013 (UTC)
 * I think this sort of incident would go unreported a lot of the time. A death or severe injury as a result of the ride would be a bit more notable and worthy of inclusion. Themeparkgc   Talk  03:07, 8 December 2013 (UTC)

Good work. Just a few things to address. On hold for 7 days.-- Dom497 ( talk ) 02:32, 8 December 2013 (UTC)
 * I think I have addressed your points. Themeparkgc   Talk  03:07, 8 December 2013 (UTC)


 * Pass!-- Dom497 ( talk ) 23:42, 10 December 2013 (UTC)