Talk:The Incredible Shrinking Man/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Abryn (talk · contribs) 23:44, 15 October 2019 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):  d (copyvio and plagiarism):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:

Sorry about the wait. - Bryn (talk) (contributions) 22:04, 17 November 2019 (UTC)
 * No rush! :) Andrzejbanas (talk) 22:28, 17 November 2019 (UTC)


 * April, Paul, and Raymond's involvement in the film is unsourced, as are William, Billy, and Orangey (mew)
 * Updated. I'm removing Orangey for now as this source says it might not have been Orangey? :( I'll add it back when this most important bit of cat acting is confirmed. I think the article survives without it though. Andrzejbanas (talk) 14:32, 22 November 2019 (UTC)
 * "On set photography" -> "On-set photography"
 * Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 13:41, 22 November 2019 (UTC)
 * "Arnold ordered about 100 condoms and placed them on a treadmill so they would drop in sequence." - No complaints, I just wanted to emphasize how funny a line this is out of context.
 * Indeed. The copy-editor said something similar earlier. :) Andrzejbanas (talk) 13:41, 22 November 2019 (UTC)
 * "Universal's intended" -> "Universal intended"
 * Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 13:41, 22 November 2019 (UTC)
 * Try to paraphrase more
 * I cut out some more of the quotes. I left some of the larger ones that I feel go into specific details that should be quoted. What do you think ? Andrzejbanas (talk) 15:26, 22 November 2019 (UTC)
 * All good, great job! - Bryn (talk) (contributions) 02:22, 26 November 2019 (UTC)

That's about it. - Bryn (talk) (contributions) 17:59, 18 November 2019 (UTC)