Talk:The Invisible Hand (The Spectacular Spider-Man)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Pedro J.  the rookie 23:16, 24 October 2009 (UTC)

this artical looks intresting, nice writeing, good images, and looks like ity hgas a good stack of reliable sources, but i will check if it is GA matiral, I will be your reviewer.-- Pedro J. the rookie 23:16, 24 October 2009 (UTC)

Images
 * lets start with the images it looks good i will give you a pass on that.


 * only thing is that you put an alt on the images.
 * ✅.  The Flash  {talk} 00:01, 25 October 2009 (UTC)

Text
 * there is a hee insted of a he in the plot.
 * ✅.  The Flash  {talk} 00:01, 25 October 2009 (UTC)


 * you use a lot of he in the first paragrah can tou put the name characters.
 * ✅ (I think).  The Flash  {talk} 00:01, 25 October 2009 (UTC)

refrences other
 * pass
 * the see also section not needed when the link is already in the artical.
 * ✅.  The Flash  {talk} 00:01, 25 October 2009 (UTC)


 * dhould there be a guest star window as i think that Clancy Brown was a gust star
 * I don't think so - Brown was in the series in two of the other episodes before this, it's just this was his first big role as a character.  The Flash  {talk} 00:01, 25 October 2009 (UTC)


 * Should it be Dr.otto octavius.
 * ✅.  The Flash  {talk} 00:01, 25 October 2009 (UTC)

well that is all i have to say about this artical, feel free to review my Featured list candidates/List of Family Guy cast members/archive1.-- Pedro J. the rookie 23:40, 24 October 2009 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review - I've taken care of all of you're issues now. Cheers,  The Flash  {talk} 00:01, 25 October 2009 (UTC)

Pass.-- Pedro J. the rookie 00:07, 25 October 2009 (UTC)
 * Thanks again for the review! :)  The Flash  {talk} 00:15, 25 October 2009 (UTC)