Talk:The Kentucky Department of Education

Lsbr Peer Review
Your page is looking great! The organization and descriptions are looking really good. You have gotten a lot of information that is going to be very helpful wikipedia. There are so many facts through your sources that you have no choice but to be successful with your page so that is very good. Overall, great organization and great information! Looking good!

Instructor Review
This is looking pretty good so far. You have a lot of information. When there is this much information, it is important to not overwhelm the reader with too many headings and sub-headings. Rather than presenting each goal as a seperate heading, I would suggest creating a single section with the heading of "Mission" or something like that, and then devoting space to summarizing each of these goals as well as explaining where they come from. It seems like you're quoting things here, but you're not actually setting off the sentences with quotations. That--unfortunately--toes the line of plagiarism. So be very careful.

Basically, you need to do a little more work as the writer. It's not enough to simply present "raw" information. You need to synthesize it into a coherent summary that provides context and history. Let me know if you have further questions. Daclausen (talk) 13:44, 8 November 2018 (UTC)